Too cheesy?

I came up with the below analogy for a presentation I gave earlier this week... too cheesy?
Adopting the cloud is like learning to dive - you need to get your technique right upon entry and look out for the sharp and pointy things lurking under the surface. Get it right and you'll improve your flexibility and agility, get it wrong and you could well break something.

 Of course, the only way to finish off is "Look before you leap!".   Just thought I'd share :-)